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Viscosity


Aspirations high, ambitions bizarre

Wanted to touch the sky

But was pulled down every time

Was like a fluid,

Could be frozen and then released

As and how wanted

But was taken for granted

As if lifeless

Caged in the bars of social prejudice

And then said “now you are a free bird”


Disregard of the compression….

it remained flexible.

And the fancy of it to flow

Wasn’t lost….

Trying to rise at each trough

to touch the crest of the Zigzag

it went on

without the fear of evaporation.



Comments

विक्रम said…
its great but appears too scientific
:)


nice to see your blog
October 27, 2009 at 8:53 AM
Shashwat J. Roberts said…
Time is lost, so is passio.
Now to move on, store the ration :)
Its a start amongst the bars,
Enjoy the glamour of the stars.

Its not solid nor is it liquid,
it projects out as gaseous.
Blow it away and create a passion,
amongst the ones who u crashed in.
:)

Happy Married Life Aditi
Enjoy Life :)
November 8, 2009 at 5:24 AM
Aditi Bajaj said…
Thank you Shashwat...today I read this comment for the first time!you interpreted right:)
July 8, 2018 at 8:01 AM
Aditi Bajaj said…
@Vikram....thanks!
It expresses emotions of an engineer ...so it had to be scientific.
July 8, 2018 at 8:04 AM
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